Friday, November 14, 2008

The Rose Of Better Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

a mother working 2 jobs to support 3 kids after the death of her husband who was killed by a drive by shooting

hard working mother paying countless and countless of expensive bills
trying to make ends meet
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Michelle Valdez 17 November 2008

those roses appear for a reason and to that mother it appeared for her not to give up on the world because she knows that her 'seeds' need more in life......than just minumwage jobs.....

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Anjali Sinha 17 November 2008

wow your poem touched me to the core yeah lovelly great write. thanks for sharing with me regards anju (do read some of mine)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 November 2008

It touches my heart deeply.The rose could signify many things indeed.Keep writin Breeze.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 November 2008

Has an eerie feel to it

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This is vey heartfelt. Great subject great poem!

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