Friday, June 15, 2007

The Rose Moon Of June Comments

Rating: 5.0

The balmy, gentle summer breeze of June
Would lift up anyones heart and catapult to the sky
The warm ocean would beckon n croon
The mermaids gaze longingly at the shore and sigh
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 19 June 2007

Bravo..... My heart beside itself can only say that the words you have placed in this poem shine of the true talent that lye within you....there just are not enough tens...

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Beautiful versing, young lady...And dedicated to a Gentleman Sir in true! Well constructed work.T.O......You Do Keep Rockin', my dear! FjR

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