The rose once grew
and fell in love
with the morning rays
of the glorious sun.
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The beginning lines of the poem are so attractive. How rose fell in love with the dawn is being so touchingly painted., as.....The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn. A beautiful metaphorical poem having nice penmanship is amazingly presented.10
Love the metaphor, as we too suffer when things aren't sunny in our lives and we must wait for a new dawn or a new beginning. 10+
Beautifully written stanzas.... loved the artistic imaginations. Loved the first two stanzas a lot. The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn.
Your optimism is really infectious. I really feel rejuvenated by ur poetry.
Wait and hope as a rose Smile, smile, smile! All is - Christ! nice poem!
Verily, we have to wait for the dawn that surely comes after the darkness.
Waiting for the whole night she danced in joy when the morning broke into dawn. Very good thought.
how beautiful is your imagination dear Tony! 10+++