Sunday, September 20, 2015

The Rose Fell In Love With The Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rose once grew
and fell in love
with the morning rays
of the glorious sun.
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Susheela Shiju 28 October 2018

how beautiful is your imagination dear Tony! 10+++

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Ntsako Manhisa 20 August 2018

Joy always comes in the morning.

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Kostas Lagos 17 August 2018

Amazing poem my friend! Splendid!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2018

The beginning lines of the poem are so attractive. How rose fell in love with the dawn is being so touchingly painted., as.....The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn. A beautiful metaphorical poem having nice penmanship is amazingly presented.10

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Luz Hanaii 16 August 2018

Love the metaphor, as we too suffer when things aren't sunny in our lives and we must wait for a new dawn or a new beginning. 10+

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Ashika Murali Acharya 16 August 2018

Beautifully written stanzas.... loved the artistic imaginations. Loved the first two stanzas a lot. The rose once grew and fell in love with the morning rays of the glorious sun. Waiting through the whole night she danced in joy when the morning gave birth to the dawn.

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Nosheen Irfan 21 October 2015

Your optimism is really infectious. I really feel rejuvenated by ur poetry.

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Seema Sharma 23 September 2015

This poem will generate a lot of hope!

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Liza Sudina 22 September 2015

Wait and hope as a rose Smile, smile, smile! All is - Christ! nice poem!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 21 September 2015

Verily, we have to wait for the dawn that surely comes after the darkness.

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Sranisha Francis 20 September 2015

Waiting for the whole night she danced in joy when the morning broke into dawn. Very good thought.

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