Autumn falling,
The bones of maple leaves cracking
Into young palms of unquietness,
When wave so gracefully,
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An excellent poem, , well written words and it shows your poetic talent...top marks! ! !
An excellent poem, , well written words and it shows your poetic talent...top marks! ! !
Impressive! A reservoir of well penned words and imagery besides its fine texture! I love it! This beautiful write clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
Ah. not bad at all. you are good at english poetry! !
I can only agree with the other comments. A very good write. May i invite you to Read my poem called, boy to a man.
magical display of words..........................Its a good jod
Savoured and devoured your mooncake.Baked in poetry dough well with eggy imageries and chocolaty metaphors.It was a delicious bite...well done
It seems everyone else has said it all. I agree with the others 100% beautiful writing!