Tuesday, August 30, 2011

The Rose Buds In My Mooncake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Autumn falling,
The bones of maple leaves cracking
Into young palms of unquietness,
When wave so gracefully,
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Arianne Owens 18 June 2012

It seems everyone else has said it all. I agree with the others 100% beautiful writing!

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

An excellent poem, , well written words and it shows your poetic talent...top marks! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

An excellent poem, , well written words and it shows your poetic talent...top marks! ! !

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Impressive! A reservoir of well penned words and imagery besides its fine texture! I love it! This beautiful write clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Ah. not bad at all. you are good at english poetry! !

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Dave Walker 17 September 2011

I can only agree with the other comments. A very good write. May i invite you to Read my poem called, boy to a man.

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Ebi Robert 10 September 2011

magical display of words..........................Its a good jod

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

Savoured and devoured your mooncake.Baked in poetry dough well with eggy imageries and chocolaty metaphors.It was a delicious bite...well done

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