Friday, November 21, 2008

The Rose Comments

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the rose is a beauty to behold
it is loved by most women on this earth
is it because the rose is like a woman?
when it opens up and spreads its petals
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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Something out of the way, but unique and interesting, well done

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Louis Rams 16 April 2020

thank you for your comment and words of praise

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2020

The comparison of woman with rose and with spider is so attractive. Here I cite...the beauty of a woman which is locked up inside will bloom like a rose with nothing to hide....she will have us like a spider has its web and us dry until we're dead. A brilliant poem really.

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Louis Rams 16 April 2020

your words are touching and i thank you for it

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