Wednesday, May 23, 2012

The Rose Comments

Rating: 4.3

velvety red petals
full and sweet
soft and light
arranged neat
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Kellsey Hartmann
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Saadat Tahir 25 May 2012

a very nice write...somewhere to the end the thread is lost in the metaphorical sense... overall very readable.... be happy :)

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Fadwa Gmiden 24 May 2012

I love your poem, it's so symbolic with a good writing keep the good work :)

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