Tuesday, May 18, 2010

The Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Close you eyes and see me
Release your senses and breathe me in
Relax your hands and touch me
Sleep Peacefully and Dream
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Nicole Annette Hofer
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Vaughn Bekker 22 May 2010

good poem, very well thought out, well done keep them comming: 0)

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Every petal is perfect Every line, every curve Never wilt does the rose Upon my grave, beneath the willow... it touched me sincerely and honestly.. Your every words speak of something new.. hones desire and faithulness till the last... beautiful n d i endore it....10 read mine..... i miss...miss i miss you... Marry to marry

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