Friday, October 19, 2012

The Room Was Filled With Gloom (Revisited) Comments

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The room felt as if filled with gloom
That the potted plants failed to lift,
Nor did its look ornamental
That clashed with its dullness like rift.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 February 2019

Spiteful of cold dullness without; I wonder if man’s best behaviours Can ever match Nature’s endeavours To rise above defeatist thoughts of tomb, mysterious life and wondrous nature........ i love your mind which produces such poems.. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 February 2019

Thank you dear Dr Antony for such kindly words. But I must congratulate you to dig out this poem written in 2012 and lying un-spotted for long years. No diamond but at least a piece of jade. You must behaving a touchstone in your hand! !

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