Thursday, February 14, 2013

The Rolling Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blues are rolling
like a train down the tracks
singing about the bad times
but hoping for a break
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Dave Alan Walker
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 25 July 2017

Right on! Love the Blues, and this poem too!

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R.j. Wynn 18 July 2013

What they said. I like it too

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Valsa George 28 February 2013

This is a poem so mellifluous in tone and sublime in theme! !

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Hardik Vaidya 23 February 2013

Dave Allan Walker, I found this jewel trapping light in its full essence. The jaguar leaped out from the poem and got me. Thanks for the maul, it was terrific. A thought just occurred to me Jaguars are now technically made by us, thank The Lord, Bentley is still hand crafted in England. Something's are made of the soil.

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Unwritten Soul 19 February 2013

And your poem rolling words in blues to moonlight blue hue..lovely_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 18 February 2013

Not a 'Blues' lover myself, but your poem is just great. (This site gives me the blues though! !) .

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Heather Wilson 17 February 2013

Music from the heart means so much to many, those old blues will live forever.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 February 2013

Beautiful comparisons make the poem very captivating! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 15 February 2013

the last line is fantastic! Dave! Good poem!

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