Monday, October 1, 2018

The Roles Are When Reversed Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the world's way deep with the life its own,
As few have much time for others to spare,
As people are plugged up, unto self prone,
I also was with me as ever ere.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

Perhaps parents to theirs were fair the least, Perchance, they failed to measure, or fell short, May be, humans aught be like birds and beasts— Raise the litter; let it thence leave the port........so touching and impressive. This is a beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks you dear Pathak for sharing this gem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 October 2018

Thanks Kumarmani for your feedback. It is such comments that encourage you to strive more.

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