Upon the stairway of despair,
Complete with broken love affairs
And promises that never came,
But faded with a touch of shame,
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im adding ti to my favorite, and i never add poems to my favorite.. you are a better poet than I. i said it before i read this and well. i say it again. you are an awesome poet. awesome.. i can't believe it. you are soooooooooooooo awesome
Agreed... I've just been reading much of your stuff, that covers a wide variety of topics and this is one of the best! keep up the good work 10
Wow this is really good. Can't believe your age..... this is right up there with some of the best poetry works.
A really fine poem Brie - -and the narrative is without a doubt a very well thought out stage by stage expression of your talent..... do keep writing....10 and much more for this - - Fay