Sunday, October 5, 2008

The Robot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Upon the stairway of despair,
Complete with broken love affairs
And promises that never came,
But faded with a touch of shame,
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Brie Carter
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Fay Slimm 27 June 2009

A really fine poem Brie - -and the narrative is without a doubt a very well thought out stage by stage expression of your talent..... do keep writing....10 and much more for this - - Fay

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Eyan Desir 26 June 2009

Wow Are you really 15? good job

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im adding ti to my favorite, and i never add poems to my favorite.. you are a better poet than I. i said it before i read this and well. i say it again. you are an awesome poet. awesome.. i can't believe it. you are soooooooooooooo awesome

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Rob Bishop 25 May 2009

Agreed... I've just been reading much of your stuff, that covers a wide variety of topics and this is one of the best! keep up the good work 10

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Tanya Stanford 06 October 2008

Wow this is really good. Can't believe your age..... this is right up there with some of the best poetry works.

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