You are the first one
That I seek in the morning
One that keeps
My day going.
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I wonder how could you write such a long magnificent poem glorifying Coffee! Great poetic imagination Rose Marie 10+
Oh, the magic of coffee/And its aroma/You bring gold/In every businessman's coffers......wonderful imagery! It's a pleasure revisiting this beautiful poem Rose!
Superb work Rose...the way you have elaborated on coffee's universality is excellent...congrats...I add it to my favourite poems list
I feel honored, Indira. Thank you for having this poem into your poem list.
Deliciously attractive piece of work...Love the aroma of coffee, very much.
Apparently it's a tribute to coffee but I think it's a message, it's not color that counts, it's the taste that we need. The taste may be in any of us, whether white, black, brown or yellow.
The tribute for coffee is sound so delicate and nice as it really fit the taste, the soft aroma is almost there in every soft line inside your beautiful poem.
Wow, Soul your comment fuels my pen to soar.Thank you so much. It is an honor.
I read your poem as I sipped coffee in the morning. Coffee and your poem turned out to be a great combination. Thank you.
All that black silkiness That soothes body and soul. wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us
Your great comment is much appreciated, Muzahidul. Thank you for the visit.
It is a great tribute to coffee having a fantastic expression. The title of the poem has finally justified nicely. Beautiful poem. Top marks.
A brilliant poem Rose! Your expression is just fabulous! Well structured poem! ....The corporate world Dresses you/In so many ways/That catch the eyes of the consumers. I will reread this poem some other day! I vote it with a 10
Glad you liked it, Dr.Dillip. Thank you for your amazing comment.
Splendidly penned crafted with finesse. A suspenseful poem that keeps the reader hooked until the last line. Coffee is an essential part of our day at breakfast, on morning breaks, in midafternoon after a siesta, on early evenings and late night. Wonderful poem Rose Marie. A 10 Nudershada
Thank you for an in depth comment, Nudershada. Thank you for your time. Your comment is a treasure.
A well imagined poem about such a beverage that you want in the morning to keep the day going.