Sunday, March 4, 2018

The Roasted Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are the first one
That I seek in the morning
One that keeps
My day going.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 30 March 2022

A well imagined poem about such a beverage that you want in the morning to keep the day going.

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Robert Austin 19 May 2020

Nice poem about one of my favorite beverage...10+

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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2020

I wonder how could you write such a long magnificent poem glorifying Coffee! Great poetic imagination Rose Marie 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2018

Oh, the magic of coffee/And its aroma/You bring gold/In every businessman's coffers......wonderful imagery! It's a pleasure revisiting this beautiful poem Rose!

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Thank you for your revisit, Dr. Dillip. It is an honor.

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Indira Renganathan 21 March 2018

Superb work Rose...the way you have elaborated on coffee's universality is excellent...congrats...I add it to my favourite poems list

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I feel honored, Indira. Thank you for having this poem into your poem list.

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Perdita Young 10 March 2018

Deliciously attractive piece of work...Love the aroma of coffee, very much.

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Thank you, Perdita for your great comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 March 2018

Apparently it's a tribute to coffee but I think it's a message, it's not color that counts, it's the taste that we need. The taste may be in any of us, whether white, black, brown or yellow.

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Thank you, Akhtar for a wonderful insight.

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Unwritten Soul 07 March 2018

The tribute for coffee is sound so delicate and nice as it really fit the taste, the soft aroma is almost there in every soft line inside your beautiful poem.

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Wow, Soul your comment fuels my pen to soar.Thank you so much. It is an honor.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 March 2018

I read your poem as I sipped coffee in the morning. Coffee and your poem turned out to be a great combination. Thank you.

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Thank you for your wonderful comment and visit, Tirupathi.

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Muzahidul Reza 06 March 2018

All that black silkiness That soothes body and soul. wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Your great comment is much appreciated, Muzahidul. Thank you for the visit.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2018

It is a great tribute to coffee having a fantastic expression. The title of the poem has finally justified nicely. Beautiful poem. Top marks.

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Thank you for your wonderful comment, .Kumarmani.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2018

A silent partner! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks for the visit and.comment, Edward.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 March 2018

A brilliant poem Rose! Your expression is just fabulous! Well structured poem! ....The corporate world Dresses you/In so many ways/That catch the eyes of the consumers. I will reread this poem some other day! I vote it with a 10

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Glad you liked it, Dr.Dillip. Thank you for your amazing comment.

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Rini. 05 March 2018

Wow excellent presentation..coffee no one can avoid

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Thank you, Rini for a wonderful comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 March 2018

Rose Marie, such an aromatic write....10+++++

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Thank you, Bernard for a fascinating comment.

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Nudershada Cabanes 04 March 2018

Splendidly penned crafted with finesse. A suspenseful poem that keeps the reader hooked until the last line. Coffee is an essential part of our day at breakfast, on morning breaks, in midafternoon after a siesta, on early evenings and late night. Wonderful poem Rose Marie. A 10 Nudershada

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Thank you for an in depth comment, Nudershada. Thank you for your time. Your comment is a treasure.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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