Friday, January 18, 2013

The Roads Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

As we travel back and forth down the paths of life
Sometimes we wonder if we're going to meet with strife
Always asking the question whats around the corner?
Just keep on moving and quit acting like a mourner
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Patricia Grantham
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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2016

An insightful motivational piece of poetry about life, which attests to the fact that it'll be an exististencial absurdity to conceive of life without difficulties. An acknowlegement of a journey fraught with stumbing blocks made easier by the spirit of universal brotherhood. Beautiful poem brought forth in lovely rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Patricia. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Amitava Sur 30 January 2014

A lovely thought in deed. Yes we have to walk along, making best of it. Withdrawal is only a death being alive, inactive......... very nice

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Ken E Hall 10 October 2013

Great philosophy on the road of life it sparks the go in ones self...one thing is for sure growing old is a war and you have to fight it to keep your health...bullets are good food and exercise daily always...regards

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 July 2013

Just keep going. Beautiful. No problem if you miss your way. You will see more. Thank you.

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Valsa George 04 July 2013

At times the journey might appear very wearisome and we may feel ike quitting! Keep going with hope and expectation and never quit! Your poems are full of uplifting thoughts and so very inspirational! I love such writes! ! |

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Joseph Anderson 03 June 2013

Inspirational and uplifting and written with conviction. Though hard it is the best way to walk the roads of life. Some thoughts to remember here.As usual, very good

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Nice thoughts. Please also read my poem Think and Act Positive. Thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 25 January 2013

Wonderful philosophy - enjoyed the read.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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