Tuesday, December 31, 2019

The Roads Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am standing still,
Here, this is the road where we meet,
Yes, the same road you are now at
We may use the same roads, the same roads,
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Susan Williams 15 January 2020

Regret is never a good plan, - - a piece of wisdom that I have yet to live by. This is a remarkably intelligent poem and well done! 10

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Valsa George 15 January 2020

The roads we may choose can be different and insignificant, but whether we reach our destination or not is the one thing really important. If a road cannot take one to the desired destination, take a different road. A beautiful message for the New Year.... Soul!

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Anjandev Roy 12 January 2020

Wisely written. Enjoyed it. Thank u, anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2020

A marvelous poem with wonderful thoughts to consider for the start of year 2020. A poem imbued with insight and wisdom. I concur with all these thoughts including the beautiful Poet's Notes. Very inspiring, Soul. Thank you for sharing and Happy New Year 2020.

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Fabrizio Frosini 06 January 2020

''Words of wisdom for a new year'' Mj Lemon says. Yes, your poem is such. Wish you ''a year of poetic wonders'' dear Soul. Best F.

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Muhammad Ali 03 January 2020

3 .. Though, some time, may be in some ideal universe, we may come to know, that, we all share a same... Destination

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Muhammad Ali 03 January 2020

2 .. Distance, journey and the path. These are parts of of life. Or life is divided in these parts. Or some people used to live in one part more than others. Or Some people are addictive to a part. As you said, best is to have some aim, some goal, a positive destination, and let's share some time the truth, the happiness with one another sharing the same roads, but may have different destinations. Very beautiful poem dear.

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Muhammad Ali 03 January 2020

Hi friend, Soul. These are your thoughts, as you said, though this is poetry. And poetry are thoughts :) . To me, these thoughts are windows for some or many poems

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Mj Lemon 01 January 2020

This terrific poem has such a calming quality! It is amazing how chance encounters can just slow everything down. A great verse, Soul. Words of wisdom for a new year....

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