Tuesday, March 20, 2012

The Roads Comments

Rating: 4.8

Somewhere roads go away
From fears, greed and foul play,
They pass the trees under the sky,
Where lonely hearts prefer to cry.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Soulful Heart 03 April 2012

u have related the road of every common person..............well put in lyrical words....

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Wahab Abdul 22 March 2012

very imaginative, yet relates with reality and with our life, the poem is very emotional and inspirational too. i love your poetry.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 March 2012

hey Ekaterina! ! ! your poems touch my heart and they come with a message.very nice.keep inking.

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Harindhar Reddy 21 March 2012

I tried to measure the depth of these lines but failed to it. Yup very deep in thought. I sense your feelings...... Where lonely hearts prefer to cry. They pass a lot of sleepy stars, Afraid of pain, life mars. Yes there is lonely star in our hearts with always blink some times we dream and we also scream other time we strive to achieve our aims however we go as the path leads us to... Heavenly said words by your friend.....

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Hey Ekaterina, I do like your poems...especially the sense inside and the choosing of rhyme and last but not least the rhythm which syntax reminds me often at my own poems :) ...haha

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