Friday, February 24, 2006

The Road Was Just Too Long. Comments

Rating: 5.0

He woke,
broken dreams,
like bubbles exploding
on inpact.
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Gina Onyemaechi 24 February 2006

You cant 'alf tell a sad one, Vincey. And how you tell it. Broken-hearted, Gina.

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Cj Heck 24 February 2006

This is a powerful poem, Vincent - and so sad. The feelings of his calm reserve and utter hopelessness come through so strongly here. Very well done. My warmest regards and respect, CJ

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