Sunday, March 17, 2013

The Road To Perdition, Michael, Verse Ii Comments

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I found her working a city street.
I stopped.
I asked her price.
She responded; "Salvation."
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Danny Draper 17 March 2013

A powerful write. While not into violence I realise this is mythic (religious) fantasy told in a modern form with a tone of old detective stories from the 20th century. Liked the strong use of the single isolated line as retort or clarification or emphasis, terrific tool.

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