Monday, June 27, 2011

The Road To Kandahar Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the treacherous road to Kandahar,
My heart bleeds for Afghanistan,
Though in its natural beauty,
It is a garden of death,
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Lawrence H 20 February 2012

good poem on Mercy mission to Kandahar...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

The blisters of the heart burnt in the fire of the breast, The house caught fire with its own flare. Some Afghans are responsible for this ruin. They are conniving with the biggest scoundrel of the world. Great poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A flight' on page 1.

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