The Road To Joyabaj Comments
Heaven pierced the rim of the world
This morning in two gashes laid upon
The flinty grimness of a gray horizon
Through which the glories of heaven-
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Superb imagery. A great descriptive poem, written with flair and poetic excellence. A positive, humanist approach to life. A super 10
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8/2/2025 7:55:31 AM # 1.0.0
I am so glad you gave me the Notes about the poem. They added so much to my appreciation of the poem. I can understand the glories of heaven cascading in golden light, falling in radiant streams upon a world hardened and grey. These words need to be pondered over: A world hardened and grayed By a deficit shaped like the absence Of the color of love A world dominated and contorted By a single species Capable of selfless compassion, yet Intent on selfish annihilation By the desiccation of brotherly love.. Thank you for images and the contemplation.