Thursday, September 24, 2020

The Road To Getting There Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pain in your eyes
Can't match the pain in my heart
Since we both agreed
That we should part
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Ray Hansell
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L Milton Hankins 24 September 2020

Ray, I like this poem even more than others by you I have read. This is nice writing and very expressive of what you are feeling. I hope your road to getting there will be light!

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