Thursday, April 21, 2011

The Road To Always Comments

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It began as a narrow path,
some miles back,
where I got on.
Dirt was all it was, this road.
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Jon McIntosh
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Dannie Urban 23 April 2011

I really like this poem, thanks for sharing it. :)

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Hans Vr 22 April 2011

Impressive poem. What a brilliant poetic idea: the road to always! The way you describe it, is really fantastic. I just wish for myself I could stay on the tarmac. Quite often I feel there are so many sandy parts alternating with the tarmac. Luckily there are some trees along the sandy parts that help a bit to get me back towards the highway. Wow, you got me really thinking. IMy thought train may move along differnt lines than yours originally but that is ok. It is a great poem. Thanks

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Smoky Hoss 21 April 2011

Great poem, well written and thought out. Your sincerity is very evident, enjoyed it much!

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