Tuesday, November 8, 2022

The Road That Was Comments

Rating: 5.0

This road had sprawling shades
as a row of trees stood with grace
Trees with heads touching together
with branches holding hands
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Nosheen Irfan
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Bharati Nayak 10 November 2022

A lovely poem Nosheen, the greenery of the road, the uncle's shop from which you could buy wonderful stuff to your heart's content and a house that protected you from many a storms! Just lovely.

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A poem showing extraordinary brilliance in the concept, phrasing and imagery. Enjoyed reading.

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Anjandev Roy 09 November 2022

This is wonderful write.....thank u....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 November 2022

Truly awesome Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 November 2022

A fabulous poem. Your last stanza is my favourite though you have sketched different things along the road. Top score.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 09 November 2022

there are many things which have been cafted by poetic enthusiasm; readers can feel here own characterization by reciting the poem; excellent to read this; great*****

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 November 2022

I just love it

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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