This road had sprawling shades
as a row of trees stood with grace
Trees with heads touching together
with branches holding hands
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A poem showing extraordinary brilliance in the concept, phrasing and imagery. Enjoyed reading.
A fabulous poem. Your last stanza is my favourite though you have sketched different things along the road. Top score.
there are many things which have been cafted by poetic enthusiasm; readers can feel here own characterization by reciting the poem; excellent to read this; great*****
A lovely poem Nosheen, the greenery of the road, the uncle's shop from which you could buy wonderful stuff to your heart's content and a house that protected you from many a storms! Just lovely.