Friday, May 10, 2013

The Road Of Life Comments

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As you walk this road of life
there will be many corners to turn
and many hills to climb
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Dave Alan Walker
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Ellen Mendez 04 July 2013

there will be many corners to turn and many hills to climb - wow... its really right- thanks, it made me reflect of what has done and gone in my life i invite you to read my poem the Life and comment..

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 July 2013

Beautiful poem...learning from own experience is the best teacher....on road of life.

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

excellent thoughts. the road of life is traveled by each

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 May 2013

Understood. Try Upside Down when you have a spare couple of minutes.

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Yasmin Khan 25 May 2013

Life is a road and we are all travelling on it. It gives big message in straightforward language using basic metaphor of life.

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Valerie Dohren 15 May 2013

Great piece of basic philosophy. Very good write.

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2013

sorry it is goal not goad, a typographical mistake please. thnx for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 15 May 2013

a beautiful message. goad of life is after crossing so many turns.

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R.j. Wynn 14 May 2013

Killer poem, Imagine you are an arrow!

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Payal Parande 12 May 2013

the life is a journey i have heard but now i have the read the most amazing poem that prove that indeed life is journey a beautiful one....a brilliant piece by a brilliant poet..bravo sir

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Shahzia Batool 12 May 2013

Road and journey have always been the right symbols of life, and you have handled both the symbols so appropriately...! ! !

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David Wood 12 May 2013

I've climbed a few hills in my time but life now is all down hill. Another lovely well penned poem.

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Babatunde Aremu 10 May 2013

Great write and philosophical. I lke it. Pls edit line 2- 'they' to there'. Thanks for sharing

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Gajanan Mishra 10 May 2013

finding straight road to a happy life. I love this. good write. I invite you to read my new poems and comment please.

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