Friday, August 28, 2015

The Road And The Hill Comments

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The road humped over the hill and dipped
and out of politeness we dipped too
and didn’t go as the butterfly did
straight across and into the view.
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M Asim Nehal 28 August 2015

Superb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! To quote from your own poetry. as the road curled steeply down from the sky though the birds still saw it all as flat with an unblinking eye. Well done. If u find time please review my poems...

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Brian Taylor 28 August 2015

Thanks, Mohammed.

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