Sunday, May 1, 2016

The Road Ahead Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don't think of me as the setting sun,
Laying its mantle of black and gray,
Don't see me as part of your dark night,
I am the beginning of your day
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Lora Colon
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Kassem Oude 01 May 2016

Join in Love brews and flows of mine heart As long as it pumps red and throbs Join in with yours love will be smart Till holy might our last gasps robs.

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Kim Barney 01 May 2016

Some idiot has voted this only an 8. I will give it a ten so that the average will now be nine.

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Kim Barney 01 May 2016

This is beautiful, Lora. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day (at some time in the future) !

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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