Sunday, September 22, 2013
The Road Comments
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We shed these orbs of regret-these tears,
because we are suffering, in our own condition.
Crying loudly, we hope the Lord most-high hears,
as we make our sincere request, for divine restoration.
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7/31/2025 9:01:36 AM # 1.0.0
So, is your poem a torch on this road... Perhaps against all proper poet manners, I would have used 'Son' in place of your 'sun'... But, not to be overtly crude, both are but mere symbols to me. I do like the poem very much. Sincerity is the core of any great poem, and you definitely bare your heart brightly. Wonderful piece.