Saturday, August 9, 2014

The Rivulet Of Feelings Comments

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You set fire sitting under the
Scorching heat of midday sun.
But, you watch the warmth
Running within my lost love.
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Neela Nath Das
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Amitava Sur 15 August 2014

It gives a nice feeling on thinking that instead of a life with turbulence it dreams for a better day to begin again.

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Chuy Amante 13 August 2014

It sounds like a song of hope!

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2014

Beautiful poem Neela with wonderful lines that touched me..... In between our pains, A rivulet of feelings Flows incessantly. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2014

To see the First Sunrise As we used to watch before! It's you. But, you watch the warmth Running within my lost love. It's someone else. That's probably the difference in the natures of a man and a woman.

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Valerie Dohren 10 August 2014

Sweet poem of memories. Lovely Neela.

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Sekharan Pookkat 10 August 2014

watch the first sunrise and the light beams of light Along the cool breeze followed by the cuckoo's songs Are as beautiful as the smile of the neon baby creates happiness to the parents in life

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