The River That Flows On And On Comments

Wow I think we kinds write alike. Nice work keep it up. You have got a future here.

oh really very nice. hopeful. i admire anyone who can write legitimately of something less than good. i cannot usually. my life usually hangs on edge. i only use poetry to uplift me since everything else can fail. just a thought. you should really publish, even self-publish. you can try and use Word to publish on Kindle and it is free. i think you can do it from overseas, too. you can charge no money or even nominal fees and i think they send it in your national denomination too. i think you would be very popular. you should try. just make sure all your poems are right on the left margin in Word. otherwise they get really messed up on Kindle. do not forget to use a nice bold typeface for the titles. excuse me if you are already on Kindle. of course. i checked and i could not find you there. you will like it especially fun is the free ebook cover which you can right click on and copy for self-advertising, Facebook, etc. this poem made me cry...

love your poems Meriam. well done.

interesting use of images to portray sinfulness. nice job!

Yes, human hatred is the loss for all good things in life

You know to express very well the desire for good and light spread! Good poem, thank you for share,10

Lovely and touching poem! Hope to read more of your work!

There are fantastic themes and imagery running through this...fantastic that u r so young yet so wise! SG

I think you have the potential to be a very good writer...you think deep and have the right feelings for living creatures, the environment and the spirituality for good and evil...what an imagination you have!

Wow, Meriam, this poem seems wise beyond your years. I think you have many poetic 'miles to go' and that they will be very interesting ones.

A sensitive, gentle poem, but not true to reality. Mankind may try to fix the problems and sins of society, of themselves and others, but they do not have within themselves the power to truly purify. The woods could only become the Woods of Light if God himself, who created the world and loved it, was accepted by the people and changed them from the heart.

Nice lovely poem :)

Hi Meriam Thank you for dropping a note of appreciation. Your first three poems are optimistic and nicely written. In fact they can be used in Environment Science curriculum.