* The River Seagull Comments

In praise of all that is fragile and lovely and yet will somehow outlast us all. I love the creative connection between the lyrical sailor and the white seagull.10/10. Love, SandraX

The ship forget sea footpaths as leaves... But they remembers scent of dream waves... --------------- Dream waves, is that sounded as a scent? - It could be a minimalist loop as Steve Riech can do......nise to read you again Tsira.....

stunning, thanks for sharing 10

The ship forget sea footpaths as leaves... But they remembers scent of dream waves... ------- Great as always Tsira! Well done...10+++

'Scent of dream waves' is such a lovely phrase Tsira - - this is a warm tender poem....... full of imagery of the sea......10 + + + Fay