Sunday, August 9, 2020

The River's Generosity Comments

Rating: 5.0

The river's generosity gives its calmness to me
After a day of traffic and other disasters
At dusk, the silence is a joy
As the stars appear one at a time
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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David Wood 08 February 2021

Rivers hold the imagination. I often sit on the bank of my local river with my dog watching it flow by.5*

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Kim Barney 09 August 2020

LeeAnn, I have posted a new poem based on my previous comment on this poem. I also gave you credit for helping to inspire it. The poem is " Sitting in Wait" . Thank you so much!

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Kim Barney 09 August 2020

LeeAnn, this poem is as relaxing as a river. I love small rivers with gentle flows, and nice calm pools of water behind big rocks, where hungry trout are waiting for my baited hook! Ooooh, that sounds like the beginning of a new poem! Thanks, LeeAnn!

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 August 2020

My heart sinks into the river With a hope of change. the flowing river there are in the heart of love to kiss the stillness of life

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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