The River Of Time Comments

Love the River idea! Rogerx.

And this just flows like a gentle stream. The rhythm and rhyme are superb and are matched by the message. You are the non pareil on this territory Linda. Excellent! jim xx

Wow, great stuff, Linda... a wonderful message and brilliantly worded! Brian

Absolutly beautiful piece of work, Top of the class, The wording and mood are perfectly matched to the theme and layout of progression, You have excelled yourself and many others, well done.

Linda, your words are so true, I know from experience how well they hit home. A beautifully written poem with such a lovely rhythm that carries the reader along. I loved it. Thank you for sharing such a great piece. Top marks from me. David

Smooth as Silk, Midnight....A spendid penning, indeed...You have captured this ''Everyone'' scenario, and in doing so, you have capture your Readers! ~F.J.R.~

A grand piece indeed Linda. I agree that that last line is a corker!

Love like today is your last. I love that line. Clair