Saturday, November 18, 2017

The River Of Reality Comments

Rating: 4.8

I swim into
The sounds and shadows
Of the past
Shaping sadness
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Anna Banasiak
COMMENTS
A B Faniki 09 August 2019

Deep and creative poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Adeeb Alfateh 31 July 2019

Time stops the existence My soul sails To the border of life I pass In silence great expression 10++++++++++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 August 2018

the sounds and shadows and finally the silence . a very nice short poem.. inspiring and philosophical. tony God bless u always.

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

A lofty verse. Witty reflection crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing Anna and do remain enriched.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 November 2017

Beautifully crafted write.Great imagery.

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Rajendran Muthiah 18 November 2017

When our soul reaches the edge of life, we pass in silence. Wonderful imagery!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 November 2017

Such a brilliant write, Anna...10+++

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