Tuesday, November 20, 2012

The River Of Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flow of fresh water
Down the mountain
Like sprinkles from a fountain
Makes clouds of tiny drops
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Jahan Zeb
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Marium Fatima 26 November 2012

Great poem.. :) great efforts i really like this one.. :)

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Payal Parande 24 November 2012

...........................you must be thinking what this is well this is me speechless

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Poetheart Morgan 21 November 2012

takes me back to childhood, teenage years and adulthood! ! Happiness has no age! ! ! Very well written! ! ! Love it! !

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Valsa George 21 November 2012

In the whirl of time's current, most of our memories get drowned! What swims to the shore is our childhood memories and they remain with us ever! This I think will be a deeper interpretation of the poem! A beautiful poem!

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Unwritten Soul 20 November 2012

You know, it's like i am having the same memories too when i read this, this poem absorbed me into you own past memory scene hahaha...what a beautiful poem..really it is a good and well written! loved it_Soul

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Stevie Taite 20 November 2012

Very uterine and nurturing this landscape! To the nature that surrounds it, to the villages it serves, and it entertained like a perceptive parent, encouraging imagination! How lovely that you reminiss With this vivid poem! Good one!

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Malakand Pakistan
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