The flow of fresh water
Down the mountain
Like sprinkles from a fountain
Makes clouds of tiny drops
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...........................you must be thinking what this is well this is me speechless
takes me back to childhood, teenage years and adulthood! ! Happiness has no age! ! ! Very well written! ! ! Love it! !
In the whirl of time's current, most of our memories get drowned! What swims to the shore is our childhood memories and they remain with us ever! This I think will be a deeper interpretation of the poem! A beautiful poem!
You know, it's like i am having the same memories too when i read this, this poem absorbed me into you own past memory scene hahaha...what a beautiful poem..really it is a good and well written! loved it_Soul
Very uterine and nurturing this landscape! To the nature that surrounds it, to the villages it serves, and it entertained like a perceptive parent, encouraging imagination! How lovely that you reminiss With this vivid poem! Good one!
Great poem.. :) great efforts i really like this one.. :)