The River Of Life Comments

Well written. It's obvious you are quite talented.

Well written. It's obvious you are quite talented.

You sure captured the pulse of the river in showing all it's life here in your wonderful poem. There's great imagery & a good natural flow to it also. I too have written a poem called 'The River of Life' if you care to read it. It is not as good as yours, but my take on it. Thanks for sharing. Spiritsong