Tuesday, September 25, 2012

The River Is Never The Same Comments

Rating: 4.6

Buddha Universe of Good
Embodiment of Peace, purely understood
All things come, and instantly have passed away
Right Now; Tomorrow; Yesterday
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Ray Quesada
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Red O'mara 12 October 2012

'All things come, and instantly have passed away'. Brilliant line. This poem brings home how ephemeral every moment and each of us is.

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Eric Cockrell 10 October 2012

well penned... shows deep understanding!

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Terence George Craddock 09 October 2012

Interesting lines and topic, the Quantum Buddha, Oblivion and Death, Buddha as a Universe of Good Embodiment of Peace are concepts I have meditated and extended on also. Your lines The River is never the same as the pages turn they wear away is beautiful to contemplate. The sky just as Real as it is Fake I wrote upon also at about your age but quite differently so your poem evoked layers of poetic memory.

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