The River Flows Comments

liked it..nicely penned! !

Joshi I have a little suggestion. I would love the poem more if it were written as follows the river of time always flows.... through out the life it never slows.... the time flies skies high.. from your birth till you die.. cope up with the racing wind.. and be a traveller of time... the river of time always flows.. never for one it slows..

lovely write...........good