Last Sunday
I spent a whole day
with a beautiful river
trying to feel close
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I loved this confession, the poem is like water flowing into my heart. I remember once that I was standing on the bridge and looking at the sparkling water. And the water took my gaze and went along with it, and it stretched my sight so much that before I realized it I had almost felt down in the water :) If you listen to it, if you embrace it with your eyes, water can be transcending. And the little circles it makes when you step into it with grace...
When I read this poem for the first time, I liked it soooo much I made a not about it in my own thought book. Just now I read the note and came back to the poem. I like it as much or even more than when I first read it. Truly superb, high level poetry, here Elena.
Thank you so much Stan Petrovich, I am very grateful to you, finally got to read the book, loved it, blown by the similarities found there, it was like a journey inside my soul!
Please read Siddhartha by Herman Hesse. There are similarities (and not only a few) with this. Excellent.
i do agree that its really a wonderful poem! ! its very inspiring! and beautifully written, i enjoyed every line! and nice flow too! and from now really i am a huge fan of yours!
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, Elena. A poem full of spirit. Becoming one with the river and losing our pain. The way is written the the reader can feel with you It is among the very best poems I have read, Elena. Superb.
Elena and my sister Elena could only give such a touch to the objects if it is touched by her magic hands. River is proudly smiling now for being honoured! Love for universal things always creates bliss. Now my sis is a dam of that beautiful river almost consumed the great essence of the whole river. But give me its sweetness a little haha fantastic imagination and full of sentiments and word play.
It is such a lovely poem Elena! Yes rivers never flow backward, they continue to move forward, braving all obstacles on their course! ! A very enjoyable and inspiring read! !
Your poems show that you have mastered in writing poetry....i loved it.
It written freely...freedom and i can feel the peace from start to the end of this write..a lovely write Elrnr, keep writing thoughts like flowing water from past now and then_Unwritten Soul
Liked it about when you wrote, and maybe there is where river called my soul, i agree with all these people.
I always wondered why I felt satisfied with my new ideas to move on by watching a river flowing! Rivers never flow backward, that is what it is all about! Now I understand rivers flow cleansing and washing my fears away when I am there. Thank you!
Really amazing poem...you learn simply from a river.. You share your feeling beautifully through a poem Great job! !
I have read and reread again, very beautiful, broad, touching. Thank you Elena!
Thank you so much everybody for such beautiful, touching comments, I am grateful and honored for every word you shared dear poets, thankful for your poems and also to all the people who may read any of my poems! I hope all of us will find more time to connect with the nature.