Monday, October 24, 2011

The River Comments

Rating: 4.5

The colors changing ever so quickly.
The temperature dropping with every day that
Passes.
Trees turning naked every night.
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Gavyn Krueger
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Ency Bearis 26 October 2011

Beautiful metaphor, great piece.

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Marcus Mckinley 24 October 2011

i can only surmise those two word as 'good bye'. who's permanence i never use myself. as sure as winter will come, so too shall spring return. well done

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Gavyn Krueger

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