Wednesday, November 21, 2018

The River Comments

Rating: 4.6

Remaining tight lipped
So words can not flood
While the barrier feels strong
Small drops could cause slight damage
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Jennifer Birchall
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Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2019

Remaining tight lipped! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Penny Simpson 13 February 2019

Jen, an excellent poem that illustrates to me what you are having to hold in and deal with yourself, to protect others - putting yourself second as ever. Strong lady, strong dam. , you’re good! X.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 November 2018

Please no more rain This barricade can only hold so much. is it symbolic dear poetess? a fine poem, very poetic. sometimes the rains of sorrows are too much we pray like this. please no more, i may break.. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 25 November 2018

Dear Tony, the barricade is me holding onto my words because if I say what's in my mind it would have huge consequences. So I stay silent. Thank you for you kind words.

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Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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