The Rising Sun- 02 Comments

virtue like his rays to suck water pleasant or dirty and pour rains of pure water for all the thirsty earthy. I like this line

WHAT A NICE POEM. I LIKE THIS POEM. THANK YOU.

Droplets of dew on the rain dazzle with gaining touch of rising sun. Sun teaches virtue with beauty of light. An amazing imagery is drawn in this brilliant poem...10

acquire Virtue divine and reject the vices of others, - - - - - - - - - - - - -I appreciate how you describe images and glide into a thought given birth by what you saw in that image. Well done! ! !

of the beautiful Earth.so beautiful line 10+++++++

Mother of all Energy The Sun, awakens all the world the world of animals and plants every one eager to run.lovely line.thanks for shairing......10++++++