Tuesday, December 20, 2011

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Rating: 2.8

how many layers
has my soul?
i' m obsessed with this thought.
none can have a single look;
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Shahzia Batool
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Heather Wilkins 24 July 2013

our soul has many layers. this s an interesting question with man y difficult answers. do we really know?

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Frank James Davis 12 April 2013

Poetry expressed in the fewest possible words is the highest art. A deeply gratifying bit of work, Shahzia!

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Hassan Butt 07 June 2012

i m Hassan jaweria's fiance. i m Electrical Engineer. i read you poems and found very interesting and heart touching. i think mam you should publish a book in English Poetry and make some name in international market for your country. you are the great poetess i found in Pakistan which write poetry in English as well as in urdu. i like poetry and use to write it and have a little collection of my poetry.

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Adeline Foster 07 April 2012

Ignore those who say longer. It is just right. I too have written one called - Who Am I - perhaps with a different thought in mind. Adeline

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Ashwini Ahir 20 February 2012

it is nice but yes it would be better if its bit long.

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Wahab Abdul 19 February 2012

excellent! no body looks at our soul.....the beautiful soul, people see the apparent acts of us and think that the acts are control by the soul or the works are the reflection of our soul. no body looks at our real good soul. Am i right?

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Kee Thampi 16 February 2012

poetry is to discover of soul and fly beyond...

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Indira Babbellapati 28 December 2011

WHO AM I, IS A HAUNTING QUESTION TO EVERYONE WHO BEGINS THE INWARD JOURNEY...

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Saadat Tahir 25 December 2011

i remembered bulleh shah ............bulleya ki jana maen kaun.... v nice lines. deep and enigmatic :) sat

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Viraj Gupta 21 December 2011

i like this poem. may i suggest something? try to make it longer. you've expressed yourself really well, but it would be great if it was a little longer. would have given more insight.

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Molay Toufik 20 December 2011

Will say darling, you try to expose who you are to us and it's very kindness and sweetly wrote by you keep it

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