Tuesday, November 27, 2012

The Ripping Skies Comments

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We often gaze at the heavens above,
hoping, hoping that they're falling in love,
When the Ripper his illusions doth weave,
for in reality our heavens do cleave.
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Soren Valentine
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Alla Simone 17 December 2012

The beginning sucks you in- captivating. And the storytelling throughout with vivid details keeps you hooked until the end. Nice work.

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