The Ringing Cell Phone Comments

Oofs gosh and anti climax… ‘…The cell phone is still ringing/On the breathless log’ hear breaking but reality...nice diction 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Good poem..................

Cell phone for me is the era 's catastrophe because of it people get more stress, it restricts their freedom and decreases their need for human and real contact, exactly like internet. Well penned poem.

hmn...no one picks the phone, no words to hear about... Cellphone keeps on ringing but no one been found... nice descriptive verses...thanks for sharing!