Thursday, December 26, 2019

The Ring Of Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's no mean wonder indeed
That such a small satellite
Can wholly obliterate
From view a mighty Sun with a unique deed—
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2019

What a wonderful poem about the Earth, Moon and Sun. So beautifully and vividly described at the exact time of occurrence. The closure lines are wonderful thoughts of gratefulness. An excellent and informative write. Onto my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 December 2019

Some poems come to you like pulsating rivers in spate, some come to your gate and for a while wait, you welcome it, try and chisel it a bit to placate, hesitant at first, she comes in sooner or late. Thanks for the good words dear poet, and my good wishes for the coming New Year.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 December 2019

A very informative write sir! Prayer offered at the end stanza is praiseworthy......10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 December 2019

You have a discerning keen eye dear poet, and you seem to read well before penning your comments. Thank you so much.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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