The Ring Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

The Ring

Rating: 5.0


Beneath a sky of graying frowns,
Behind a waning moon,
Beneath a group of frozen clouds,
Bereft of raining moods,
Beneath a bunch of aging stars,
Bemused to wink or shine,
Beside a sea of stoic waves-
Betwixt two shores alien,
Besieged by hostile gang of birds-
Believes in not to sing,
Beside a smiling fate he girds
Begins the countdown ring

Kesav Venkat Easwaran
24 January 2019

Wednesday, January 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 February 2020

Bemused and besieged! ! ! Muse of the ring. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 16 February 2020

how beautiful is it, very deep philosophy, behind all these amazing images there is and End...Wow 10/10 excellent the countdown ring...all the best Dear poet Kesav

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2019

A 10 and much much more for the voting. This is not the same addition as before.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 February 2019

I wanted to post this part and PH warned me that I have posted the same comment, thus double, but that was not double/ the same, that was why I added that last line.Thank you for your understanding

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2019

Mesmerizing and captivating. A pleasure and a treat to read. Thank you for sharing.

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