The Right Turn Poem by Phoenix Feniks

The Right Turn

Rating: 4.5

I hope that one day
I will find the strength to leave you.
Instead of walking through the same bare forest,
I will take a sharp turn to the right
unlike the left that you instructed.
As I run fo the right,
I will become encased in blossoms of spring flowers
and healthy grass
that thrives with bright moss.

I suppose I will never know what happens to you.
Whether you remain encased in the same forest
with decrepit trees
and rotting leaves that had fallen just as you and I,
or you live lavishly with soft summer showers
as you frolic in the rain amongst wildflowers
that dance with you.
But I truly hope
that you get everything
you ever dreamed for,
and I never hear a thing about it.

Friday, July 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: broken friendship,friends,deep,change
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
please let me know how I can improve and thanks for reading!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Hulme 06 January 2024

I usually Read the greats Poets and see how they write. Every one has there own style, which is not a bad thing. But that was a nice poem.

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