The freedom to love,
The freedom to chose,
The freedom to Be,
To win or to lose,
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So very beautifully heart moving And beautifully inspirational! ..
Wonderful, powerful and inspiring write. To my Poem List.
The freedom to write Openly honestly Without any fear Of public ridicule
Sandra Freedmon, The freedom to be, to win or to loose. This bit right here really stuck out! I have not read your works before so this was refreshing. Thanks for encouraging my heart. Blessings in your wonderful writing. Kathy
Yes! Yes! Yes! ! ! ! ! ! Wonderful Write! ! ! ! Words Of Truth That Flow So Beautifully! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You AGAIN! ! ! ! ! Sandra! ! ! ! ! ! Truly Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++
Lovely piece. you may have a little edit to do. chose should probably be choose, and you might want to swap round To Worlds, yet not known, to To Worlds, not yet known, Subjective I guess, but seems to flow better. Danny
To be free in sharing our thoughts and expressions in poetry Freedom to uplift moral things God bless your poetry, Sandra
This is a poem that takes no prisoners! It is the ultimate statement of freedom as the essence of life. In fact the word freedom appears so often there's no room left for a countervailing word like WISDOM or GRACE or KNOWLEDGE. But those words have their own secure orbits, they don't get challenged, abused, ignored like freedom. I can hear Richie Havens at the beginning of the WOODSTOCK FESTIVAL singing FREEDOM over and over until a whole generation believed in it. Amen to that!
Three faceted freedom - right, responsibility and duty. Great thinking. I love the poem.
The freedom to be and not to be......Great writing.
The freedom to be and not to not be As an Individual, to always be Free Unfettered freedom is a natural human instinct. A nice poem to read.
Great poets think alike. I was prompted to write a poem on freedom a couple of days ago and I am pleasantly surprised to see how similar our two poems are (Though I prefer your rhythm and rhyme to mine) . Roy
freedom is our right. Yes freedom is a responsibility. good read
Just lovin' it Sandra thanks for sharing