The Right Regimen Comments

...or DID you mean 'regime': 'A government, especially an oppressive or undemocratic one. A usually heavy-handed administration or group in charge of an organization. A way of organizing or managing something; a system.

REGIMEN: 'A procedure, program, or routine. A systematic way of managing something.' Denish, You did NOT mean 'Regime'?

I was going to give this poem 4 stars but accidentally (or subconsciously?) I gave it 5. It is too bad PH doesn't allow us to correct some things more easily & others at all.

The last 4 words of the poem bother me a bit. 'Need' for what reason? I might use this for the last sentence: 'In building a secure and content nation cautously, but, with speed.z

I SUPPOSE you've also considered asking that your poem be spread by news outlets, but when violence to...whomever...is a possibility, both you and anyone advocating with you may have reason to fear for their safety.

I just read your fine Poet's Notes. You may go down in history as a national hero (or scoudral) , depending on who are the future leaders. (IF SOMEONE READS YOUR POEM) .

Hey! You own (or borrow) at least two nice shirts I see. ;) line 2: I might put 'excessive' in front of 'any'. Supposedly everyone has an ego (if they are 'normal' and not dead) . And 'pride' in itself is NOT BAD, I think.