The Right Regimen Poem by Aloo Denish Obiero
The Right Regimen
Dear President, I thank you so,
For setting aside any pride and ego.
To lend an ear to the opposition,
And seek solutions through cooperation.
We've seen leaders fight for power in the past,
Citizens suffer, property destroyed, lives lost,
Economy shut down, leaving us all in despair,
But you've chosen a different path, since you care.
Please don't give up the course of unity,
For the sake of the nation's prosperity,
Let us work together with sincerity,
Towards a brighter future of dignity.
Thank you, Mr. President, for taking this lead,
And showing us that we can indeed,
Rise above our differences and succeed,
In building a nation that we can all need.
I just read your fine Poet's Notes. You may go down in history as a national hero (or scoudral) , depending on who are the future leaders. (IF SOMEONE READS YOUR POEM) .
Amen. From antiquity, art has been used as a transformative to shape the society and impact the world. I sometimes choose to convey my important information through poetry.
...or DID you mean 'regime': 'A government, especially an oppressive or undemocratic one. A usually heavy-handed administration or group in charge of an organization. A way of organizing or managing something; a system.
REGIMEN: 'A procedure, program, or routine. A systematic way of managing something.' Denish, You did NOT mean 'Regime'?
I was going to give this poem 4 stars but accidentally (or subconsciously?) I gave it 5. It is too bad PH doesn't allow us to correct some things more easily & others at all.
The last 4 words of the poem bother me a bit. 'Need' for what reason? I might use this for the last sentence: 'In building a secure and content nation cautously, but, with speed.z
I SUPPOSE you've also considered asking that your poem be spread by news outlets, but when violence to...whomever...is a possibility, both you and anyone advocating with you may have reason to fear for their safety.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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7/19/2025 4:39:03 PM # 1.0.0
Hey! You own (or borrow) at least two nice shirts I see. ;) line 2: I might put 'excessive' in front of 'any'. Supposedly everyone has an ego (if they are 'normal' and not dead) . And 'pride' in itself is NOT BAD, I think.
Haha... Edwards, you must be funny