Sunday, August 6, 2006

The Right Approach Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you recall that tiger at the zoo?
We tried so hard to make him look our way.
You whstled; but I said, 'It doesn't do
To whistle at a tiger. You should pay
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James B. Earley 02 February 2010

How does one really define 'freedom? ' Excellent composition!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

Fine captivating composition! nice imagery! ......10+++

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Yasser Koor 25 October 2008

oh it is amazing words nice poem and so beautiful. well done

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Bill Thomas 20 February 2008

Oh wow. Sometimes the proper response to a poem is awed silence, but a blank message wouldn't show up! Keep writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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